Where the Water Sleeps
By Orion Shade profile image Orion Shade
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Where the Water Sleeps

The sun had just begun to crest the mountains, sending pale rays of light spilling over the lake, casting a golden shimmer on the glassy water. Mist curled from the surface, slowly lifting, like a breath being exhaled into the cool September air.

The sun had just begun to crest the mountains, sending pale rays of light spilling over the lake, casting a golden shimmer on the glassy water. Mist curled from the surface, slowly lifting, like a breath being exhaled into the cool September air. The lake was quiet, save for the faint rustle of leaves in the distant trees, where the first signs of autumn had begun to show in splotches of orange and red. The air carried that distinct, sharp scent of changing seasons, a mingling of damp earth, pine, and the faint musk of decaying leaves.

The old man sat in his weathered canoe, his gnarled hands resting loosely on the paddle. His fingers were stiff with age, but they still wrapped around the smooth, worn wood with familiarity. He dipped the paddle into the water, the blade slicing through the surface without a sound, and with a slow, practiced movement, he pushed himself forward. The canoe glided with ease, barely disturbing the stillness of the lake.

There was a certain rhythm to it—the quiet dip of the paddle, the slight ripple it made as it moved through the water, and then the gentle glide of the boat as it coasted over the mirrored surface. He had been doing this for years, since he was a boy, in fact. This lake had seen him grow from a gangly teenager into a strong young man, and now, into the frail, white-haired elder that he had become. Each stroke was a part of him, as natural as breathing, a conversation between him and the lake that didn’t need words.

The air was crisp, though the sun’s warmth would soon creep in. For now, it was just him and the morning chill, a familiar embrace that reminded him of every autumn spent on this water. He could smell the faint remnants of summer—wildflowers along the shore, their vibrant colors faded but still clinging to life. There were no birds yet, but the occasional splash of a fish jumping broke the silence, sending ripples spreading outward, distorting the reflection of the pines lining the shore.

He paddled deeper into the center of the lake, where the water was clearest, dark but shimmering with the sun’s early light. His shoulders ached in that dull, persistent way they always did now, but he didn’t mind. In fact, he relished it—the way his muscles still responded, even with their complaints. The ache was familiar, grounding, a reminder that he was still alive, still capable of moving through this world on his own terms.

He paused, lifting the paddle from the water and letting it rest across his lap. The canoe drifted lazily, caught in the faintest of breezes. He closed his eyes and inhaled deeply, the cool air filling his lungs, and for a moment, everything seemed to stand still. The mist had all but vanished now, leaving behind a pristine stillness, the water so clear it was as though he were floating above a world suspended in time.

“This is it,” he whispered, though there was no one to hear him. His voice was soft, gravelly from disuse. He hadn’t spoken much in days, not since he’d arrived here for what he knew would be his final visit. He ran a hand over the side of the canoe, feeling the rough texture of the old wood beneath his palm. The canoe had belonged to his father once, the two of them paddling out into the lake together, laughing, fishing, talking about things that seemed so important at the time but were now only distant memories.

He could still see his father’s face in his mind, as clear as if he were sitting in front of him now—the strong lines of his jaw, the way his brow furrowed when he concentrated. His father had always been serious on the water, as if the lake demanded a kind of respect, a silence that the man had never dared break. They used to come out here early, just like this, when the world was quiet and the lake was still.

The old man opened his eyes, blinking against the soft light. He glanced around the empty lake, noticing the way the golden sunlight had finally broken through the trees, casting long shadows that stretched across the shore. The chill in the air had started to fade, replaced by a soft warmth that spread slowly over his skin.

He leaned over the side of the canoe, dipping his fingers into the water. It was cold, so cold it sent a slight shiver through him, but he held his hand there for a moment, feeling the connection between himself and the lake, between his past and his present. This was where he belonged, where he had always belonged.


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